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please freaken read before you comment.

I got inspired to do this by reading comics for sonic and I was reading the issue where sally got robotisized.In this picture my fan character sofie is getting robotosized when she doesn't know what it is.So there for she is confused,sad and in pain at the same time.Poor sofie:iconlalaplz:!
Sofie owned by =sofie-the-hedgehog48
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Okay first of all.



The coloring is sloppy,untidy and confusing.
The effects are bad,it doesn't look right,her positioning is bad,the highlights are bad altogether. Her color is too neon,it gives a bad look.The lighting is all wrong,the shading is very ugly and I hate the look of her footing.
She looks like her feet are on crack or something.
Her gazing up towards the sun is really bad because it makes almost no sense,when you do this,please plan ahead,don't just jump in and not think or rush for the matter.It'll turn out like crap.Sorry.It just will.Didn't mean to be rude but yes,this is how the piece is.
I hate the Color,The character,the background,the everything.
WORK ON YOUR ART MORE.
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I have decided to critique this! xD

Well, first off, the coloring is very sloppy. You can do better than that. That's what we have the magic wand tool for.Her facial, is well, "meh" to me. Not very impacting. The anatomy is horrible. Even hedgehogs have necks. The ear is way too small in proportion to the head/body. The hands are not drawn that well, their decent at best. The robotisizing part, it's kinda cool. That's like the highlight of this picture. The outfit itself is alittle too plain for my tastes. The shoes are kinda cool too. The bands should be covering her eyebrows (Yes, hedgehogs have eyebrows.) The background is kinda cool. I like the whole "depressing" aspect of it. Like "Holy shit, this is bad." But you should have colored it in better. So then it looks more realistic. The robotisized arm looks alittle off though. Arms aren't like pasta. The have points/curves. Overall, the picture is alittle less than decent. You could have done better.

I hope that this wasn't too harsh.
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~12isMyLuckyNumber Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is good!! but you should try and take more care of the colouring. . . im not saying its bad, GOOD IDEA but just put care to your colouring and it'll be more pwetty~~ :iconsmile-luplz:
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!sofie-the-hedgehog48 Dec 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks
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~thenerd57 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow, this is so amazing. And the short story you gave for it s great.
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!sofie-the-hedgehog48 Nov 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks.
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~thenerd57 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No prob. It looks great.
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:iconshaiyah568:
Sofie your gonna have to take back your group because clearly im not doing a very good job at it!!!:forgiveme: Ill still be a member or a co founder but i cant be the founder:Sorry!!!:worry:
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!sofie-the-hedgehog48 Nov 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Just delete that group or get rid of it I dindnt know what to do with it either.
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